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The maps below show the layout of an Australian market Garden in 1995 and now.


主体段分段方法：按照 <方位> 分段
主体1：南边、中间
主体2：北边
开头段
The maps illustrate changes in a market called Garden Market in Australia, comparing its layout in 1995 with the present day.
概述段
Overall, this markethas experienced significant changesover the period shown. Withincreased mechanizationandthe introduction of new crops, ithas developed into a more modernized facility.
思路要点：
- 变化显著
- 新增许多机械化装备、引进新农作物品种，整个区域更加现代化
Body paragraph 1
It is clear thatthis marketoccupies a rectangular area, surrounded bygreen landto the north and east.In the southwestern corner, a storage shedhas been converted intoa house. The small cottageto its righthas been removed to make space fora tractor parking area,just belowa new herb field.Further to the rightwas a larger farmhouse, whichremains unchangedin the present plan.In the central section, a former strawberry fieldhas been completely replaced bybeans.Similarly, the apple fieldto its easthas been transformed intoa glasshouse.
思路要点：南边、中间
- 给定区域呈现长方形，北边、东边有绿植
- 西南角：storage shed (被改建成house)；其右边的cottage被改建成tractor的停车场，位于herb南边；再东边是一个较大的farmhouse，现在不变
- 中央地带：strawberry被替代为beans；其右边的apple被替换为glasshouse
Body paragraph 2
In the northern section, there was a strawberry field inthe top-left cornerin 1995, with areas for workers and tomatoesto its right. Now,althoughthe strawberry sectionremains largely unchanged,more tractorsare placed in the northeastern cornerfor harvesting, occupying the initial worker's are.Similarly, a larger field for herbs has replaced the former tomato area.
思路要点：北边
- 西北角原先是strawberry，现在保持不变
- 右边是manual labor和tomatoes，被tractors和herbs取代
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